Good story

I really loved this story and I hope to read the sequel soon.

What happened to the ward that was to keep out the dark mark as I see the greasy git is back in the school.

Good story, especially liked the dialogue (all the conversations about science, politics, economy, philosophy, etc.) and the characters. I dont think it was too anti-climactic, i mean it showed Voldemort as an idiot with delusions of grandeur (which i think is totally accurate) and his ending came like most idiots easily. Same goes for Dumbledoor and Fudge, no need to make the ending anymore grand, complex or sensational in my opinion. Now im just curious about the sequel. Keep on writing. )

I just finished the story and am (semi) patiently awaiting the next chapter of the story. I hope you can post it soon. As far as the other planets you suggested I prefer Naboo. I love the Harry-Potter Star Wars crossovers. But that is just me. I will read it no matter where you go with it. I am going to tell my daughter about the story. She is also a big fan fiction reader.

What happened to chapter 27?

Great story! I honestly think you should have them visit either Abydos and join the Stargate Universe and possibly find Atlantis (you have already put some possible foreshadowing in for this) or Vulcan and have them join the Startrek Universe (I'm chuckling just imagining how the Vulcans would react to magic users).

My greatest respect for you to have written such a great story with lots of interesting ideas, thoughts and concepts.

It was fun to read even, as you said at the end, with the anticlimactic end. :-)

Thanks

The end was GREAT too!
I'll be looking forward to the sequel!
Hopefully it will be soon!

Hello, I wanted to take a minute to tell you how much I am enjoying reading your Amazing story. I found it last night and I can't stop reading it. Right now I am on chapter 19 ( the end of it). I can tell you now that I will be looking forward to the sequel of this story. Until then take care, and PLEASE post the sequel soon.

well, this has definitely been a most interesting story. I find it commendable that even though English is not your first language,I could see you improving from the beginning of the story to the end. there are only 3 plot devices that I find to be a little too convenient.
1. the portals are not that well explained and make it too easy for the protagonists to get what they want done.
2. the antimatter device. I find it hard to believe that they would be able to develop such a dangerous device, let alone make it work the first time.
3. the surveillance automatons, also because they simply make it too easy.
otherwise, great effort.

nice and now draco and crew are in trouble lol

cool

interesting