The Dark Cupid chapter, you should do it like this

First do the cannon beginning with the lesson in class but switch it so instead Marinette is making a love poem for Chat and Adrien takes it out of the trash and thinks it’s for him, then Have Ladybug trying to confess her love for the chat(haha I made a punny) and her get hit by the hate arrow, and have it so her lucky charm is some sort of weapon that break something, like a mallet or something, then have Chat do the chase for a kiss scene, clearly not wanting to but have to, then the kiss, and the Ladybug yeet from chat(like cannon but roles are reversed) and LB swipes the akumatized items and hits it with her lucky charm item(make sure to have chat tell LB what the item is and a happy valentines day just to make it funny with LB saying something like cannon too) then to end the chapter have it focus on Marinette with her finding the response valentine card to the card she was righting for chat in her room and make it so a black cat is outside on her padio area just to make her think it’s from Chat, which it kinda is, and best you make it so Adrien forgets to put his name due to tiredness from his father’s bull and the super life he has lol

Lol. Poor adrien

Don't give up Adrien.

I want to see where this goes, yet there is only two more chapters left. :(

Awww. I am becoming a puddle of goo with this cuteness.

How on earth is there 100 reviews from fans raving about this story on Tumblr? Yet, only 75 people comment on this story. Please continue when you get a chance.

I love your story, if you wouldnt mind, I would love it if you would email me if you make the next chapter to your wonderful story, if not, i understand. But if you will, plz email me it at

web2theweb yahoo .com
Just subtract the spaces in my email, and email me it , I will respond.
Thank you,
Web2theweb1

Adrien and Ladybug? Or more Marichat!

Why is this completed?! This was so adorable and needs more!

This is awesome

I saw that you have discontinued this story, and I was wondering if you've put it up for adoption. I really like it.

-JF

I really hope this isn't where you end things. This was a really good story.

you should make digital art on these characters I love to see what they look like

I loved the chapter.

Aww, sucks that you discontinued this! But I completely understand, so I won't judge. Anyhow I really really REALLY loved reading this! It's all mixed up xD Thank you for having taken the time to write what you did of this story! *hands you a cookie*