Oh my gods I can't tell you how hard I laughed while reading this chapter~ the asshole sniffing is when I really cracked~

THIS IS OFFICIALLY THE FUNNIEST FUCKING STORY IVE EVER READ ON HERE. DEAR GOD IM CRYING FRIM LAUGHING SO HARD. FUCKING JIMINY. I CANT.

I need more of this and for a Crosspoints update, ditty moaw lol

Omg! That Lexus and Cobra part was so sad but cute! Then Jackal's and Lucy's relationship how he wanted it slow but then everything changed at the end was cute!

damn i want this to be continued!

Ok so how hard do I need to beg for an update of this one soon?

I adore this fic. Jackal and Lucy is probably my newest favorite ship but I can never find many good stories about them

I really like the dynamic of their relationship.

"stickier than a hooker's cunt at dawn" Jesus Christ I'm dead. You're killing me. I woke up my dog from my excessive laughter.

I JUST FUCKING WATCHED PINOCCHIO BEFORE THIS...GODDAMNED DISTURBING AND FUCKING FANTASTIC! OMIGOD, COBRA! I LAUGHED SO GODDAMED HARD I CANT EVEN...OMIGOD THIS IS GREAT!1

lmao. was grinning before, but his name omg hilarious prefection

man...i wish i could favorite this more than once

I love it! its amazing! hope you can update soon~

I love this story3

well we learned a few things today kids. how to fix wet electronics, what happens when. two blonds get drunk and how a older pseudo brother shows love. all qhilw getting the hot chic.