I like this one-shot.

You have been my favorite author for years. Tonight you saved my bacon. My kid is constantly bugging me to tell her stories. I suddenly realized tonight I could read fanfiction to her. Thank you for this story, she isn't old enough to understand it completely just yet but she was happy with it

Totally cool. Loved this.

It bothered me from the first time I ever saw the movie that no one (NO ONE, dammit!) seemed to be even SLIGHTLY curious as to why Elsa had ice powers in the first place. There have been several fan-fics written that address that issue (JEGlass's epic "For the First Time in Never", for example, and my own story, "Meltdown") but I haven't seen this approach before. Nice work. Very nice. Explains a LOT. And now I wonder if Loki has any interest in Elsa as a possible wife ...

I think I have to Favorite this.

considering the bestial natures of lokis other children, elsa go off quite luckily

I really liked this idea, do you think you will ever continue with it?

Oh this was great! I loved it! I love stories where Elsa is Loki's daughter, and this was a unique take on that concept! I would love to see Elsa and Loki's meeting from their perspective too!