tifa hissing at saying to her boyfriend turned fiance cloud strife of course i will always say yes i will be your wife i love being the next mrs strife

tifa saying to cloud of course I am going to say yes

Tifa to cloud of course my answer to you asking for my hand in marriage will always be yes and next time son t be so late coming home or you will miss me wearing nothing but a apron wink

cloud should have taken that underwear from dio and wore it with nothing else on while he and tifa was alone in their bedroom

The story is awesome! I love it.

Oh my gosh, this was so fluffy and sweet. I completely adore this! Definitely one of the best Cloud family fics I've ever read. Excellent story! :)

Youre going to continue this story write? because is freaking adorable.

OMG! Soooo cute and fluffy! I loved it! Please write more of these! :3

This is wonderfully sweet. A nice oneshot.

This was just precious. Love the small "twist" at the end. :)

This is adorable. The feels are real in this one.

I do think this story could have used much more detail. In some parts, it comes across as robotic and the emotions are not conveyed well through the text. This is by no means putting you down as a writer because this piece of fanfiction is a very good concept. It's also a good fluff and a good difference to all the depressing fanfictions that come with FFVII (I do like my depressing stuff but it is nice to have a fanfiction like this one breaking the monotony). I just feel that it could use more "life" to it.

Showing vs. Telling is a hard thing to do in writing, for any individual with any story. Although you tell us enough of what's going on, not all readers can picture scenes and not all readers can see the vivid picture in your head. Showing something like the taste of the eclairs, the bit of innocent embarrassment about being questioned about his (Cloud's) family (showing by giving reason or more detail into such a reaction), and even the appearance of characters (even if we all know what Cloud looks like... perhaps this Cloud differs... does he stand up straighter, appear differently than his past self? Even the small things can make a big difference).

Either way, this story was cute and enjoyable. I do see a few verb tenses here and there that do not match (from what user Dashwood reviewed with).

-The Illuminati
(Reviewed by The Defiled)

Are you continuing this? I hope so! (Asking because you left it at a perfect end to where it could either be completed or continued without trouble)

Jammy! This is so cute.

I love the family dynamic, you pull off the multiple roles so perfectly. One tiny thing: you're verb tenses are a little inconsistent, nothing a quick proof-read can't fix.

I really enjoyed this!