Thank you for this amazing chapter. I do think that this is a very realistic take on how Katara would try to approach Zuko for her own benefit. I love the sparring scene, especially the fact that Katara was very creative in winning this match. I hope that you do well and that you continue to write.

I’m really enjoying your story. I do have some thoughts though on things that are often glosses over in stories but that often get to me. With her hands being in Earth cuffs how is Katara eating? Are they feeding her? Are they lose enough to feed herself? How are her conditions feeling when it comes to going to the bathroom or if she’s dirty or feeling ill.
It’s something I often think about in stories that don’t address it.

This is so exciting. I find it incredible how spot on your characterization of Zuko and Katara is. I am curious what game Katara will play and how she will create trouble for Zuko. Thank you for this amazing update.

Your Story is amazing. The slow build of a relationship between Katara and Zuko, Katara's realization about Zuko's scar etc. It is perfect. I can not wait for the next chapters, especially the interaction between Zuko and Katara. Hopefully Zuko will change his side and try to be good. Thank You for this amazing update. Keep up the good work.

Please keep updating! This story is so goid and I can't wait to see where it goes!

I really like this chapter, it showed Katara's realisation of Zuko's motives for betraying her, and her slowly begging to understand how human the crew (and Zuko) are

This is really great!

Im enjoying this fic. And your writing was very good at 13.
It seems the chapters are uploaded on the wrong order. And 1 chapter is duplicated.

This is really great!

I hope you find the time to update this more regularly because I'm so interested to see where this goes.

All I can say is, that after reading these ten chapters, I want more. You said the firts five chapters aren't hat good, well, actually they are very good, especially considering you were only thirteen when you wrote them. I enjoy this AU and your writing style a lot, so I just hope for an update soon

Glad for this update.

This is one of the most original AU fics I've ever read! I also love the concept of slow burn Zutara so I'm excited to read the rest of this story. The criminal origins of Zuko's crew makes perfect sense; I always wondered what incentive the rest of them had to abandon families and friends and go on a 100 years old seemingly-endless search.

Hey there! Nice update. I like that Detective Katara is on the case. :) I love how you brought up propoganda and indoctrination into the story because like this continue to happen to this day which does nothing but keep up the ignorance of people.

Well done and keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm very curious how you're gonna make Zutara happen after all of this! I mean I can understand Katara hating Zuko until the end of her days for all this mess!

I just read all of this in one day, so I'm eager for more.