omggggg, THIS STORY WAS FREAKIN AMAZING! I LOVE W.I.T.C.H SO MUCH ESPECIALLY WILL. (She's my favourite GUARDIAN EVER! xx)

This was good. The build up was great, the reveal that it wasn't Will at the door. Really a lot of top notch horror.
The only criticisms I have are that the suspense kinda wears off at the mid point because you let the monster out of the box (and maybe the fairy outa the cloak? ) too soon, the dialog sometimes tips into being a bit clunky, and the characters have a tendency to explain their thoughts to each other.

This best horror/suspense/mystery fanfiction I read in while... I had hook on first chapter! I didn't stop reading till I was finish, I would love if you could continue reading your work or even better if you continued this lovely story. Either way I'm happy and impressed.

This best horror/myster fan fction I read in while... Keep up the good work... I wish you could continue though. :-}

The last chapter needs to be proof read but it was a very good story, filled with thrills excitement and magic. I loved the part when Will used the heart of Kandrakar and I wish Hay- Lin had told her parents but beyond that I hope someone writes a sequel...(Unfortunately it can't be me. I suck at writing scary stuff. :P)

This was an amazing story! I'm so glad that I decided to read it. Thank you for writing.

Awesome way to end the story! Really hope you can continue with what will happen next because the way you create this story is so amazing. Love it

Another awesome chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Love it so much!

not sure about anyone else but reading the history of the asylum i kept thinking this was going to cross over with the darkest dungeon game

As always another brilliant chapter mad. You have me hooked to this book so much that I can't wait for the next every week. Can't wait for the next chapter will be counting down the days for the next one to be uploaded

Come on Will! This is sooooo good writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Another week another awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one

The suspense is killing me Can't wait for another awesome chapter from you

Nice cliffhanger. My guess is that is not Will. She called Dean "dad", not something Will normally does. Will the other members of W.I.T.C.H be making an appearance in this story?