Reviews for Orihika Fusion |
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The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 7/8/2016 Wow, that's fun:-). Though that brought up a point, pregnancy. Curious how this'll go. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2016 I think that a big part of these working is because Orihime thinks it should. |
Uis chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 Good. Liked it very much. I have read some of your earlier work, and it's good to say that your writing skills have improved. To add one more thing to that improvement;ALWAYS WRITE OUT NUMBERS. Don't use the numbers symbols. '90%' - Ninety percent. It's longer, but any good writing is worth it. What I don't like about your work is how short you make the events after the lemon. What happens after the lemon is usually short, just a few lines. This story had about 13 lines of text after "The next day" Can't wait for your next work |
Natsu is Awesome chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 Cool chapter, wonder if Rukihime will come back for a reunion chapter(with some slight differences since Rukia and Orihime changed over the time skip) |
LooseTie chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 Hahaha, who's Orihime fusing with next? Rangiku? Yoruichi? Jackie? |
Teloch chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 Nice! |