Reviews for EXTRACTION |
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![]() ![]() Nuclear Gaster theme: watch?vRrkzIN2eP0U |
![]() ![]() Chapter themes: either watch?v4FeL0x0VMks or watch?v3L1DEvzsftw |
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![]() ![]() learn ALL of the science FUCK YEAH SCIENCE |
![]() ![]() this was actually really nice, good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you fix chapter 4 please |
![]() ![]() This chapter acutely made me cry |
![]() ![]() I can't read chapter 4, 5, or 6 without scanning through all the things telling me what font you're using. Idk if this is just a mobile issue, but it makes me not want to read those chapters. |
![]() ![]() they think it's fair... this is why they're justice, isn't it? |
![]() ![]() you meant: ... UNBELIEVABLY GROUNDED, DO YOU HEAR ME? at least two consecutive spellin errors in a sentence is thy record. |
![]() ![]() 'UPHAPPY'? you meant ~N) (APPY. |
![]() ![]() psychology, not phycology. well, i assume that's what you meant. whatever it was, phycology 8n't a word. |
![]() ![]() i think you meant small chunk a the puzzle, not chuck because that doesn't sound right. and toriel has healin magic, as im pretty sure it wasn't flowey who saved you from himself at the game's start. if i'm rememberin right. |
![]() ![]() really really LOVE THIS! the dads(well one dad one possible dad but i lke that theory best so whatever) interactions are SO gr8 to read. just the BEST. 888) |
![]() ![]() This was a really good story, I like your style ol'buddy! |