Reviews for Brokentale
Megumi chapter 1 . 2/29
Wouldn't that mean that Underswap, and Dust and all the Sanses would end up in the same place?
Cool!
NBoss01 chapter 10 . 10/1/2019
The fic idea of this was really cool I must say, fic had the characters nice and fleshed out, the pacing was pretty good but the plot fell shot on the expression, Chara's inspiration felt pretty weak but I loved the back and forth between Chara and Frisk and how chara manipulation was handled. Other than them all the other characters felt underused and in desperate need of further development. The last chapeter lent to a major disjoint of the story with next to no hinting that something like that would happen. Shame you stopped, would of liked to see where this went.
Ghostguy12 chapter 10 . 8/16/2019
Soooooo... Is this still going, is it canceled, or was this supposed to be the ending?
PoisonCupcake101 chapter 10 . 2/20/2018
Honestly I hope u give Chara a Happy ending along with everyone else, I've read enough stories to see that people always put down Chara or kill her in the end, I find that sad and annoying, I really hope she gets her own happy ending to.
Airiling chapter 10 . 2/5/2018
This is amazing
Rasgelebiri chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
İyiymiş
jjjj4plus3 chapter 10 . 2/18/2017
YOU CALL THIS AN ENDING?!
Valgreen007 chapter 10 . 1/31/2017
Awesome keep up the good work
Capt. Schroller chapter 10 . 1/28/2017
I got money on that the timeline completely rested to the time when Chara first fell into the underground and met her new family.
duhorcommonsense chapter 10 . 12/4/2016
I love this story! By the way are other Sans, like Error (coming to delete the timeline) going to show up?
WolverineOtter chapter 10 . 8/31/2016
Hope this isn't a cliffhanger series :( I haaaaate thoooooose wehhhhhh
Nightspirit152 chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
AWESOME!
Perserverence chapter 10 . 8/14/2016
Please tell me it isn't over! i have it bookmarked on my computer in hopes that there is new chapter, this is an amazing story, everyone is in character, it isn't focused on Sans (like most fanfics) It has a nice story, just please finish it! I feel like Hazel wanting to hear the end on An Imperial Infliction!
Wolverine Otter chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
Please don't tell me the story is over! When is the next chapter coming out?
KateBloodworth1105 chapter 10 . 6/28/2016
I just discovered this Fanfic two hours ago and already read up to the update. I only have good things to say about this Fanfic, I love the story so far! I also appreciate the creativity, dedication and time put into this. I can't wait to see if there is another update!
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