Hey, so... are you goong to continue this?
BECAUSE ITS AWESOME. LIKE OMG MARCO WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN TO YOU AND LIKE STAR? DO SOMETHING.
Ok so if you aren't going to continue this I'm just gonna tell how good of a read this was. Idk but you said that you thought that what you thought up was cringy or something? BUT ITS NOT. It's just amazing to read and I where on the edge of my seat because WHATS HAPPENING? MARCO NO! STUPID LIZARD SHIT. And more of these emotions.
So yeah THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING

YOU SHOULD FEEL GUILTY YOU LIZARD SHITBAG. I HOPE YOU DROWN IN YOUR OWN GUILT OR AT LEAST THAT STAR SMACKS YOU IN THE FACE.
GOD FREAKING DAMNIT

Toffee, Toffee, Toffee. I can't even feel sorry for you.
GO SCREW YOURSELF WITH A SPOON.
WHY IS YOUR NAME TOFFEE. YOU SHOULDNT INSULT CHOCOLATE BY NAMING YOURSELF AFTER IT. YOU ARE NKT WORTH CHOCOLATE. YOU PIECE OF SHIT

NOPE TOFFEYLIZARD MAN. STAY THE FRICK, FRACK SNICK SNACK AWAY FROM MARCO.
NOPEDI NOPE.
STAR WHERE THE GODDAMN SHIT ARE YOU?

IS THIS STOCKHOLM SYNDROME THAT IM SENSING?
I SWEAR TO GOD LIZARD MAN IM GONNA FEED YOU TO THE OWLS.

What kind of fan fiction is this? Genre?
I really enjoy it

Any more episodes to read..?
Also, can you tell me what genre is this kind of fiction?

Is this an alternate ending to "Storm the Castle?"

How to get stories like this

Anime slave story can you tell me how to get stories like this

It was like a anime slave story lol

Aaww. So sad. But you make Marco followed that meanie's every command and make him cute like a puppy! Is this the end? Can't be. Is it? But still,awesome fanfic you made!

That can't be it, there's no way that's the end.
You know, I was expecting to see just a bit of Marco fighting the potion, but this works aswell.

Keep up the good work Brochacho

Oh shit...
This is where it gets real...

Keep up the good work Brochacho

Wrong, you are the boy who is about to have his life thrown out the window because your a stupid shit Marco.