God this is just awesome. I love it and am honestly so excited to see where this amazingly intricate plot is going.

I'm really excited to see where you're taking this and I can't wait for the next chapter, you are a rather talented author.

Beautiful characterization of Hux in this chapter, I can definitely believe he would react exactly like that.

It's really cool the way you've orchestrated it yo still be canon but also different and I like that tremendously. Overall this is just great.

I'm not sure why I think is so god damned adorable. Could it be your amazing writing? It's most definitely your amazing writing.

Another awesome chapter, I really am excited to see where this plot is going

this is fantastic, I'm not usually a big fan of smut but this didn't make me uncomfortable so thumbs up.