Damn girl, this is hot! Great job

I don't know why it took me so long to read and review this but alas, it's been done.

I'm really glad I read this. I needed a nice E/O pick me up.

As for the pieces you use in other stories, I'm assuming the little bit about Olivia kicking El out and then going to him and "telling" him was something to do with Lewis.

Very nice job.
I can't wait for you to finish TG so I can read it. ;)

Hot and sentimental! Excellent work!

No more goodnights. Very sweet ending.

much much better

Scandalous was an apt description but it was incredible. How much begging/bribery would it take for you to write more EO sexy times, TG world or not? The image of them lying with Noah on a mattress while he falls asleep will forever be ingrained on my mind, so adorable. I want to read a double date between them and Nick and Amanda, that'd be interesting. 'No more goodnights' was by far my favourite part though.

This was a good surpirse! I love this one shot. All the EO domesticity and love always makes my day. It was kinda funny too the way you wrote Liv and El. Lots of people like to write them together as slow and romantic (which is ALWAYS perfect) but it was nice to see a deviation from the fluffy.

I'll be waiting for an update on TG!

-V

Little bit of sweet, little bit of smut. I loved it!
First of all, you're a master at characterization. You wrote Olivia perfectly (and Elliot, too, for that matter). Usually I don't like stories in second person, they feel somewhat contrived, but in this case it worked really well, so kudos to you for that.
And the descriptions were just great. Overall, excellent :)

First it was really really sweet. Then it was really really hot and made me really really uncomfortable because I'm in public and now I'm overheated. Then it was kinda kinda sad because of the mention of that back road. And then it was hot again. And then sweet and now I'm just yanking on my cheeks smiling to myself because this is it. This is all I ever wanted from you. This is my prequel to After All.

I love this! It wasn't horribly smutty...I've read worse. I think I've said more than one that I want the boyfriend in After All to be Elliot, so this works perfectly for me!

Ugh, Lucy! You've done it again! You are such a brilliant writer and the emotion is always so present. Thank you for sharing this with us! Love it!

Oh my god. Absolutely amazing. Admit it. You like writing Bensler more than Bensidy. I know you do! Lol. I loved everything about this. The concept of the story was so simple but you managed to make it something so complex and beautiful with your words. The detail made you feel like you were right there. Love it love it!

Loved this. I'm still hoping for Elliott. I personally just can't find any chemistry with Brian. It seems so forced.

I love this story as I knew I would and reading your stories always reminds me how much work my writing needs. You're writing is so good and so on character and the imagery makes it feel like we're right there. It's wonderful. Thank you

Ahhhhhhhh! These are a few of my favorite things:

Her saying in TG that nobody would ever get her in the position that she was in this story with her legs spread open on the kitchen counter and yet here we are with Elliot, whom she trusts and loves and just GAH I love it!

Any mention of Nick...I'm obsessed with his little brotherly ways ;-)

THE ICE CUBES YOU'RE WELCOME

This was perfect in every way possible. Well done, dear friend. Now I can't wait for a TG update! xoxo