Reviews for Haunted |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Yato has a lot of baggage, doesn't he? It's nice, if sad, to see him reflecting on it, and a bit heartwarming to see Yukine step up and comfort him. There wasn't a whole lot of dialogue and it was all really short, but it was actually really good and you didn't need any more. It was powerful enough on its own. And that ending, with Yato finally letting Yukine be the one that keeps them both strong for once, was great. I think that needs to happen every once in a while. Anyway, great fic :3 |
![]() ![]() I just wanted to say, "I love it." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very moving. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() That is so sweet. It really highlights their growth as god and shinki, and as people, as well. I am moved. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm SCREAMING this was heartbreaking but the implicit Yato/Yukine at the end was sweet in an understated way and I love that. Thanks so much for writing this, it's very IC :) |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I LOVED THIS! There is a lack of Noragami fanfiction, and therefore, not enough angst for my poor kokoro... :(( And I just want to give Yato a huggeeee hug right noww,,, my poor baby! (sorry i'm ranting) Also, I noticed that Sakura isn't listed as a character on ! Not even under her real name, Tamanone! Like EXCUSEEE MEEEE Well, thanks for the great story! And sorry for the long review (well there are just a lot of spaces)! |
![]() ![]() ahhhhhhh, so good! this was very sad, yet very sweet. their bond makes my heart so warm and you portrayed it perfectly. amazing one-shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this concept! Very well written, except I would pay attention to your verb tenses, since your tenses transitioned from past to present throughout the writing. Other than that, your writing style is developed and beautiful! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautiful. I think this really reflected their bond perfectly. It truly described what Yato MUST be feeling through out the season! I love how your words strung together so perfectly to create such emotion as could be felt in this short moment between Yato and Yukine! Random Connection: I would compare this piece to a snow flake. Being so complex, yet so simple- all the while holding a kind of grace and uniqueness not matched by those around it. A symbol of nature's ingenuity without being overly perfect. ... my apologies if that got weird... Anyway, great work! -Uni |