How old is Percy in this fic because you mentioned that he aged 1/16 of the rate of the average human so I'm a little confused. I'm imagining him being 14 but I don't really know.

The plot was epic just work on grammer

I kinda wish I knew it was gonna be a story like this. I was thinking he gets experimented on gets out gets found by gods then so on but now he’s fighting them and it’s weird

Idk what kind of werewolf’s these are but I think the canon ones are just big ass wolfs not bi pedal like Skyrim ones but idc this story fucking slaps

WHICH FUCKING PART OF WASHINGTON?! THERE’S FOREST EVERY WHERE EXCEPT THE MIDDLE.

it is sort of good but i think it needs to start near the second book and should be rewritten so that percy can be more involved with the cannon story line and he should definitely end up with hestia there are to few percy/hestia fanfics i also think he should not be so overpowered he should be more like a captain america powered demigod a son of the fates maybe let me know what you think because i just have to say the kingdoms of amalur reckoning fate power would be awesome to read about and a perfect power for the son of the fates so let me know what you think

No, don't quit. Maybe some editing or even a remake to flesh it out, but the concept behind it is great.

I enjoyed this D:

I actually liked the storybecause this percy is different.

Is he supposed to be an off the leash Alucard?

I think this story is great and I would have wanted this story to continue but if you don’t want to it’s ok

Man I was really hoping for the story to continue, in my mind I don't really care of the story has shit way of telling a story, I'd the plot and the idea has me enraptured I would binge the fuck out of it.

Hope you'll make a rewrite or continue the story with your new found way of writing the story.

Cause its just a waste of effort to give up now when so many people like the story.

I freaking love this story. It is something I haven't seen before it has a great setting.

My honest thoughts Are I Love is story & it very awesome . Keep go on . If you want you can fix some the mistakes you made . But put some old into the maybe new story . Please

I think you should focus on Percy and one of the gods/goddesses and leave the rest of the POV's be for now, furthermore I think it would be great to see Percy work on his main goal, getting revenge on specific humans... I kinda feel like you made Percy really OOC, I can't see if him talking about marrying, having sex, etc with maiden goddesses is him provoking the Greek gods or just his real wants? Please give more info on that as well!