Nice story, it kinda reminded me the novels we could read in Elite II's manual.

Only downside (to me): the direct involvement of Aisling Duval, I prefer when protagonist don't interact directly with lore character, just to avoid some later incoherence. But that's more a personnal opinion than a real downside.

Can I hope for some others stories involving CMDR Hunter ?

Great ending!

This chapter was awesome as always. But I think you messed the pages up. You just pasted the entire story again xD

Is there more to this, I've thoroughly enjoyed it so far! And would love to see how it ends.

Great plotline and I'm really excited to see where this goes!

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Decent story. Looking forward to finding out what happens
Could use a little proof reading as the spelling got out of hand.
Also, it is Mess. Not mass.
Please don't make it a love story those are the worst.

So far an excellent read! I've loved every moment!

Whew, somebody's sure annoyed. Definately a good read though.

Is this finished? If not, please continue!

A very good start. I will follow with interest.

A surprisingly good start. I started reading this with no intention of finish it-yet the story kept pulling me forward until I reached the end-I don't like space opera per say, but this has caught my attention somewhat. It'll be interesting to see how this turns out for Anwen and her transportation of the three passengers to the Auserid system. Keep up the good writing my friend.