The angst! My heart was hurting! I love reading stories where people who are completely right for each other leave each other behind just to reunite in the future! It's so perfect and you did such a great job!

I just binged this entire show all over again and totally forgot how much I love it. So when I decided to check FFN, it's easy to say I was extremely happy and impressed with my first Red Band Society fanfic. This was amazing, and realistic enough that I could actually picture this happening if the show ever continued. Leo and Emma were very in-character, and I'm glad you had Emma come out of her shell. I could go on, but it may take too long, so I'll leave it at this—you've written an incredible piece here, and I'm definitely favoriting. Awesome work!

This is really, really good. The technical stuff (spelling, grammar, punctuation) is correct, thus making it easy to read. But more than that, the story substance is great. I love that they ended their relationship and got some distance and perspective. Very realistic. And I love that you referenced their horrible date and other specifics from the show. Lastly, the line about her holding his hand as his world broke made me catch my breath. That scene is my favorite from the whole show. Thank you for this piece, and I hope you write more.

Wow, this is a great read. very well written. the dialogue between Leo and Emma stays true to what was seen and heard on the show. You did a very good job at painting the scenery as well. so good. You are a very gifted writer.

That's just brilliant! I loved reading it. And I really hope that's what happened to them.