Cute and sexy! I hope you are still planning to continue this, but I understand if real life is preventing you. XD Thank you for sharing it though 3

Bro pls update this soon hahaha

I AM WATCHING THIS FIC. IT'S YULLEN AND ITS ABO. I WILL WATCH THIS BEAUTY. NOW WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE? YOU DID A GOOD JOB.

~giggling~ I would think Kanda would wanna hold Allen so yah cuddling would be nice, that and running his teeth along his mates neck lol.

Its was very great! Them cuddle! Luck!

That was..so fuking HOT
Let them have sex for a week.

-screaming, then faints from bloodloss-

No regrets x3 I kinda wanna see some cuddly fluff next chapter...with some teasing on Kanda's part, 'cos teasing Allen is fun. :3

Yes please have them cuddle

Thank you for this start ! But you write you are the owner of DGM ... Mh , i'm not sure... Maybe this story, but not the original. I don't see the mangaka here.
See you soon at your new chapter ! (sorry i'm french, but i read with pleasure !)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ this would've made a great story, please continue, i wanna see what kanda will make allen do. Please~

I'm liking this a lot and it's really interesting. I look forward to read what happens next, and seeing where this goes next chapter.

love this! its very well done! Beautiful writing!

I actually remember this story, and at the time I never really reviewed, but I guess that's good for me, 'cos now I'm reviewing, and the site won't tell me I already left one. :)

It was a while ago since I last read the original, so really, the majority of what I've read the first go around is not entirely there...but seeing this first chapter here? I guess my interest was renewed. I'm gonna be looking forward to seeing where you'll take this story as you revamp it, I suppose?

On another note...I also got a little confused at first because my email alert was for this story, but it was also claiming a chapter 2...though this seems to be the only chapter...and I do recall more chapters than that xD (hence why I had come to the conclusion of you revamping of this one)

So...will there be any other chapters soon? I think I have read over this one awhile back. I won't lie, I not so sure I remember it fully, though I am aware that it has changed. That thing about Mana, or Neah, are they not still one in the same? Twins? Why hasn't Hevlaska told Komui where the crystal was? Does anyone act like Alphas or Betas in the fic, or they just say so? You made Allen a beta, does that mean originally he couldn't have children? Does Allen know that he is acting as a mother to Jasmine? Will Allen and Kanda have the opportunity to raise Jasmine if the Order wants to take her away? Are there any omegas in the 'Black Order'? BUT, other than my stupid questions, this is a great chapter. Starting from today, I look forward to updates! Thanks for not giving up on this one. Yullan are one of my favorite pair, especially when it's and mpreg! Thanks!

So sweet love it