That was different and great owo Good work!

I need to say this, but Jayce and Aja were not needed in the story. They were just in the way and couldn’t be useful at all.

So she like mech find her and then she learns about the autobots from them ALSO SMOKESCREEN MUST COME AND JEMIA WILL BE HIS CHARGE

It was a very very very good story loved it a lot and a great ending to :)

Oooooh I can't wait! ;3

TACOS! ;3

loved the fact that you're putting the avengers in. you are aren't you? guess I'll find out later ;3

Omfragginggosh, u wrote it like a trailer, so good I could see it so perfectly in my head, I'm so so so pumped u have to write this soon, question will u write the avengers cross over for the sequel? That would be interesting to see, but I don't want to put to much pressure on you, keep writing keep reading. Nova out ;)

You taunt me Phaser! Now I'm sitting on the edge if my figurative seat! I don't know if I can wait any longer! *impatiently sobs* I'm so excited!

Nicely written. Except I must feel sorry for you, sine you clearly actually have fallen asleep in your science classes. One, the flood of biblical myth is physically impossible. Two, if an object as massive as Unicron impacted the Earth with enough force as to bore his way to the Earth's core, there would not only be a direct channel, but the energy released would set back life on the planet by a few million years, if that didn't shatter the planet then and there. Thirdly, it was clearly stated in the canon that the magnitudes of the earthquakes were identical, and all originated from the center of the Earth. Lastly, it really surprises me that you haven't figured out the parallels between the Transformers' religion and Christianity. Jemina literally touched the hand of God as this universal cluster knows him, yet still she prays to a fickle god who, if the bible is to be taken literally, advocates mass specicide, torture of the innocent, and revenge as "justice".

I am going to do my best to describe what I got out of this, and who was in each tiny scene.

1. I suspect the pink femme is someone canon, but can't really be sure..Elita? In the Well?

2. Three of the Thirteen are seeing how Aliena is doing.

3. Aliena is explaining what happened on Cybertron to Rustle.

4. Recap of who she is for the audience.

5. Shockwave is still out there and being a total nuisance. The Autobots(and Knock Out) try to fight him, but Knock Out is hurt and Aliena seems to be the only one there to help him.

6. The responsibilies of being a Prime is stressing her out.

7. Starscream and Silas are back in action. Sideswipe, Bumblebee, Jack, Raf(or maybe that's Rustle?), and probably some others are trying to stop them from doing bad stuff.

8. Predaking and Aliena are talking about being the last of their kinds... (Her name sounds a lot like alien, is a non-human alien? Or at least half alien? That would explain her powers.)

9. RB Blurr made a bet with Knock Out and was going make him eat the wrench, thinking he'd won. But actually Knock Out won and now Blurr had to eat it.

10. Aliena is pregnant.

Cash is out. Peace!

Don't judge me I'm a fangirl here, lost my password again

*lives up to username*
*sound of glass breaking*
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Mom dropped a cup, you thought it was my fault, didn't you? XD
OH MAH GOSH
THAT LAST PART :D
YAAAAAASSSSSSSSS

What I just read the last line and. WAHT!?

OM GOODNESS YOU CANT KEEP US WAITING

Wonderful!

hi i love this story alot also that is very funny ;)