I like this version a lot better than what we saw in the episode. Much sweeter! Nice job!

Awe, great alternative! I'm glad that she didn't lose the baby!

Great job on this! I wish this was the way they wrote this episode. You write the characters beautifully! The scene between Jill and Ryker was perfect. They had such a great relationship and it shows through. I love how you circle back to pizza impressing her. Their love shows through the whole fic. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.