ooh a luv triangle...

oh gahds
ur so cruel
but i lovit
so...
u know...
gotta keep reading...

omg u love harry potter and lotr too?!
omg SAME!
btw, this fic is goooooooooood!

A few glaring inconsistencies and bits that weren't really in character and spelling and grammar errors but otherwise, a good story.

Good fic - Moriarty is well portrayed in this. One slight thing though, Moriarty is a bit less hands on than that, also you're a bit skimpy on details.

Not quite plotty enough to be a story and not quite whumpy enough to be just plain whump.

Please, please, PLEASE add an epilogue! Don't leave us with that! :D

That's so cute! I love how supportive Sherlock is :).
It would be nice if you could go into a bit of detail about how Sherlock forgave John, because it seems a little sudden- maybe you could have John ask about it in the future?
This chapter was still amazing!

Well that was a rollercoaster! I thought John was... And then he wasn't... And Sherlock came back!
Brilliant chapter.

The whole story stared out nicely.
But now... I am not sure what is going on. I feel a bit lost. Could you try and explain the motives a bit, soon? I mean I do not see the point with anything the characters do anymore...

Aww :( poor John! I hope things get better soon. Thus chapter was brilliant as always!

No! Jawn! I need more!

Thank you so much for another chapter so soon! :D
On another note, you may want to re-write John's desperate bid against Moriarty's men-you use the word "goon" a *leetle* too much :) Ohhhh poor John ;-; I just want to hug him.

Nooooo! More soon please. This was brilliant - I love the cliffhanger!

Holy crap! Please update soon! ahhh *crying* noo