I loved this it would've been a great moment to see in the show

This was a very interesting concept of what might be waiting in the Underworld, and I love the Pan cameo - so appropriate!

UGH RIGHT IN THE FEELS

Love this. Just, yeah. AMAZING

That was amazing... Like wow perfect..

! I love it so much! This was written so well, and I adored every word.

I cried. Y would you do that to me? It was well written but perhaps a bit to much dialogue. Add some more discription & thoughts, maybe make it a bit longer. That's my advice. You are awesome.