Reviews for Melting (Season Series)
yaoiwizard1787 chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
For your first person story of smut, this is pretty damn awesome! This was my first time reading a smut yaoi fanfiction in this perspective, and it was honestly done so well. I definitely felt chills and pleasure course through me from reading this :D thanks for all the effort you put into it! This helps me with my inspirtation for writing as well
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2019
Loved this
LW12 chapter 2 . 1/29/2018
can't wait for more
Mrs.MagnusB chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
It's getting hot in here...so take off all your clothes...haha that was great!
SuzukiChiyeko chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
I think the first person was done really well. In some cases, authors tend to start too many sentences with the word 'I', but you managed to be creative in your phrasing. That makes this story a lot better to read than most other first person POV fics- I usually don't like first person POVs, yet I really liked this.
Of course, the story is a bit predictable, but that doesn't make it any less fun to read. Akihiko walking in on Misaki doing something naughty is always funny, and the ending was cute :)
Thanks for writing!
LW12 chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
Great story
Anne0 chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
nice! ahaha summer heat could always do wonders! good job!
Mel chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
So good. Love it!