Reviews for Pick
HollyGlen chapter 13 . 9/1
Wow. This fic was just...wow. I literally feel the weight of angst sitting on my chest and I’m so sad it’s over! This would make a fantastic movie. Well done!
Perhentian chapter 13 . 8/17
Thanks for writting this, it is a nice piece of fanfiction!
On the bridge chapter 13 . 6/2
I can't remember the last time I laughed and sniffled along with a story so much. I loved all of it, every dip and turn and creative play of our beloved characters. You did an amazing job!
foxylittlelady chapter 13 . 5/13
That last scene I had to break up reading. I could feel her anxiety and hope so strongly it became my own. Very well written! I don’t know if I could do what she does. *applause*
guest chapter 13 . 4/20
omgggggggggggggggggg!
i loved itttttttttt
its soooooo gooood
i loved the way each character is so real
their flaws make them human and so much more appreciable and relatable
turningtodust chapter 13 . 1/5
PERFECT STORY
I LOVR'R'E IT VERY MUCH
WAS SMILINAND CRYING
YOU GOT TALENT IN WRITING EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS AND INSIGHTS AND SONGS
MY GOFD THAT WAS F BRILLANT
and I really didn't want it to end. I was dreading it. But it did and Nooooo!
And yes!
No heartbreaking 'cos it IS finished.. It has an Ending.
Thank you for that
But

It' s finished
Guest chapter 13 . 1/4
that was umm...no offense very uncomfortable to read, hermione here is so weak willed damn...
yesubai chapter 13 . 12/15/2019
I usually never comment, but damn! I felt all the emotions- laughter, embarrassment, sadness, love. My husband even asked me if I was ok, and I couldn’t tell him the truth because it sounds stupid that you’re crying over a fanfic, but it’s true. You are seriously talented. Now if we could see a sequel with Sirius and Hermione with 3.5 kids, that would be great. Bonus if it involves James and Lily and whatever is going on in their relationship. Cheers!
JulietRoses chapter 13 . 11/13/2019
I loved it! absolutely loved it! I have laughed out loud many times during the story, it earned me some weird looks, but worth it, completely worth it. Brilliant story!
diamondnightskies chapter 13 . 10/11/2019
This was...pretty damn incredible, but I'll be honest and say it left me with a bit of an uneasy feeling. Hermione's inner monologue is some of the funniest shit I have ever read. I loved it. Earlier in the story, when she doesn't hear from him for days, I felt like who the hell convinces someone to give them a chance and then not only leaves them to sit around waiting for him but also doesn't give her the courtesy of taking 5 fucking minutes of his time to come and say goodbye and tell her the situation. That's fucking shit and she should have said so. The last two chapters were a bit unexpected. I guess I assumed he would have known about the pass, so it was a bit of a jolt to see his hostility. Like, I feel bad for Daphne. Plus I wonder...what did happen to Lily? What's going on with the Moony/Tonks thing? Is the whole band just forever going to be ok with their lying dickhead of a manager pulling the shit he does? I kinda wish there was an epilogue.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/8/2019
so good! I almost never see muggle au fics (and the ones I have seen I haven’t liked) but I LOVED this!
SeeMeLaugh chapter 13 . 5/28/2019
One of the best fanfics I have ever read! Had me laughing so many times. Amazing!
liciaxo chapter 13 . 4/23/2019
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

Please :)
Guest chapter 13 . 3/30/2019
I love this story so much like fUCk
PoeFan93 chapter 13 . 3/29/2019
I loved it. I wanted to scream at them both but it was so good.
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