*sigh* I really wish Ripper had gotten his redemption story...

Good story, though! Great character development!

Like a re-write, or a movie being remastered into HD? I’d like to know what to expect. Already liked this fic a lot before, so I’m sure it can only get better. Wouldn’t kick an alternate “Lightningfire stuck up for Ripper and he joined SkyClan” ending chapter out of bed, but that’s probably wishful thinking haha.

my cat might be a daylight warrior lol UwU

A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one!

Really wasn’t expecting this. It’s been a long while, I had to rack my brain to remember some of the characters and their relations to Lightningfire.
And may I say her and Wolf are still just as cute as ever?

Not much to say though. A nice uplifting way to wrap everything up with a bow.

This was my first story of yours that I read, good memories.

Another great chapter to end a great story. Keep up your amazing work! And as always, I’ll see you next time!

You know what would be really cool? If you did a spin off of this where lightningfire falls in love with ripper and leaves with him and becomes the new queen of the city to save all the cats there from oppression

Ha! I bet Leafstar is really around of her kits

I think leafstar's punishment was just

I liked the epilogue but I wanted wolfshade and lightningfires kits

What’s going on with this chapter? I think it’s the one Frecklewish is killed in, but it’s a completely different story instead. What happened to the chapter with Frecklewish? I’m rereading the story since it’s finished now.

Great and touching ending to a wonderful story!
This is honestly one of my favorites of all time, right up there with Blue Shadows.
This makes me want to see their kits so bad! But then again this is a perfect ending. I’m not sure what I want!

Maybe a Frosted Heart chapter :P

Thanks for the good times I’ve had with this story, I appreciate it and can’t wait for whatever is next!

I love this! Ahhhhhh! Can you do a sequel? Like of Lightningfire and Wolfshade's kits. They'd be soooooooooooo cute!

This is a great story, and I feel it would fit in well with the rest of the Warrior series, if not for the continuity changes. Like seriously, are you sure you aren't a member of the Erin Hunter team under an alias? The love story between Lightningfire and Wolfshade was well done, especially the part with his amnesia. The prophecy covered everything, even the parts we didn't expect! All the canon characters felt like they did in the books. The overall theme of the story was quite nice, and once again fit the Erin Hunter style. Your characters rarely felt like they were being stupid or missing the obvious, and when they did, it was usually because of annoying emotions. Overall I have to give this story a 10/10 with the hope that you never stop writing.

Poor wolfshade

that was great

ja! Leafstar soooooo has her paws dull with her new litter