Awwwwwwwww. This was the cutest thing I ever read. Beautifully written, very sweet and so lovingly brilliant. Sherlock was so sweet in this and John was beautiful in it too! Wonderful job!

I love how you structured this. It's not linear or precise, and it manages to capture a snapshot. The blabberings of Sherlock's mind are represented through those run-on sentences, which is rather clever! Love how simple this moment is. Its brevity and the emotions within the snapshot moment are just executed perfectly.

Excellent job!