don't let the a holes bring you down. people pick my stuff apart too but you can choose to ignore things. I hope you pick this back up. I really like it

damn it, I cried...

This was one of the top 5 fanfics I've ever read in my life. The plot was fantastic, the description of the emotions were perfect. I haven't had a chance to read your other stories yet but I know you're a great writer. I'm using a translator to write this comment, so forgive me for possible spelling mistakes.

Noooooo! Cliffhanger! Whyyyyy?! I happen to love this story, and think it is an amazing work. So, thanks for writing it, and I’m really sad that it’s not continued yet. *tears* Please write more soon! Thank you.

YAY! I adore this story. I love how Hermione is a complete badass and a bit overpowered but broken at the same time. Adore it. Thank you for writing this and rewriting it. I shall go read it in the morning as it is about midnight and I am tired as f*ck. So thank you!

I love this chapter.

Holy shit. Death adopted Hermione and she BLEW UP HER EARTH.

Yay. Can't wait.

Hey you write really well. Don't listen to the nincompoops. It takes great courage and imagination to put your stories out there. Keep on keeping on.

hey love, just here to say that I love your story but I get that the hate sometimes it's too much, if one day you want to come back for this then you'll have me to read everything but if not. Well thank you for this anyway!

Wonderful story and beautiful speech. Hopefully I will be reading more of your storys.

love this stortly please continue

Love this story! I think you did a fabulous job:)

Really sorry to hear that you stopped writing this! I read it all in one evening, i was just soo hooked.
Glad to hear that it's getting re-written though and I will be looking it up the very minute i'm done here.
Please continue writing, you have an amazing written voice, and gave such great life to your characters.
All the best

Your writing is amazing. Yes there were a few mistakes, but that's why things are usually edited. When a book gets published, the author sends it in, it gets edited by 3 different people before being sent back to the author. The author fixes the mistakes and sends it back to be exited by 3 more people. Then it goes back to the author one last time before a final check, then published. This is fanfiction. You are one person writing for the enjoyment to you and others. You don't get paid. The critics who don't enjoy the little mistakes in the story, should try writing one this interesting themselves and stop picking on you!