Yessss. More I say, more!

So padme choose love over everything. Well, that's better than die in broken heart. Really, anything better than die in broken heart, George.

Love it! But why are they staying on mustafar?

absolutely fabulous. cant wait to see what happens next!

this is awesome, ily and your writing :)

I absolutely love the way you've described Padmé's inner turmoil - I've always been curious to her inner feelings and this really opened it up for me. I also liked the part at the end where Palpatine dies ;)

So I came across this because of your tumblr promo and I think it might be the first Star Wars fic I've read I usually stick to Harry Potter and the occasional Marvel fic but this was really good! I love padme and anakin and your writing is great, thank you for sharing with us

ANNIE I LOVE IT KEEP GOING BABE
-Amanda

Oh my. So promising! You write beautifully. I passionately await the next chapter!

Great! Loved it. Please keep going

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL FAM HOLY SHIT

wait how long are you going to continue this?
lmao i thought it was a oneshot, this is a pleasant surprise

ahhh this is like everything i've ever wanted from alternate ending for rots! you've kept the characters really realistic :) hope you continue with this!

Yooo this is the best work I have read in a really long long time.(seriously) The story just flows naturaly. You really did a gorgeous job. I mean nothing seems out of character and it's awesome.
Thank you for sharing this you did a terrific job.
Keep it up!

I really enjoy this version. I really like it :) keep it up

okay I'm sucked in