Reviews for For A Good Time, Call
BorderLand chapter 1 . 6/10
Many people will die once he finds out the truth.
Azure Swan chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
Wow...

Ordinarily, I wouldn't bother to review a fiction that's over a year old - unless I knew the author was still active. It's a shame to see that you're not, as far as I can see. But I'll post this review anyway on the off chance you are still lurking around these parts, because 'For A Good Time Call' was written beautifully.

The humour and characterisation was 10/10. The awkwardness and relatability of moments like the changing scene and the sleezy come ones really pulled me into the moment and made me sympathise with Ken, while simultaneously chuckling at his reactions and cluelessness.

Somehow you've managed to get into Kaneki's head so convincingly. It's not often you see writing like this, where the author has quite literally nailed every aspect of the character they're trying to write. I know how hard it can be from my own efforts of portraying characters that comes nowhere near close to this. You were absolutely spot on.

Your construction of each scene is also so ... good. Great, even. Each paragraph is bolstered with engaging language and punctuated to bring out a humorous and emotive tone (whether it is frustration or embarrassment on Kaneki's part). And you build up to a moment with a really nice pace 4. in particular stood out, with the opening about Banjou.

Gushing, gushing ... gushing. I think I'm done gushing for now.

Great work!
Akabane Karma chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
THIS IS GREAT I LOVE IT
The changeroom scenes were great but poor little haise being embarassed was just hilarious
The Platinum King chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Im sorry but im thoroughly dissapointed... The story itself was great and i had lots of laughs throughout... Not to mentioned i felt embarrased FOR kaneki... But what i was most anxiously waiting for was kanekis reaction the moment it is finally explained WHY people react the way that they do to his backside... I cant wait to read more of your stories tho
tati1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
I adored the tsundere-response. And boy, does the manager have a lot to answer for!
Viiranen chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Yes, this is so nice, cute and the spandex wonder Kaneki had will in fact be missed~ Also cute misunderstandings that result in flustered Tsukiyama are always welcome. Nice.
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
This was endlessly amusing.
Pink Blood chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
Oh my! This NEEDS to be cannon! Hahahah! I love it!
Anon chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
Waaaah, another Tokyo Ghoul fic! Thank you so much for writing this, it really made me crack up. I very much enjoyed reading it! Have a very happy day, or week, or just-well wishes to you.
Yuu chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Ahh Sasaki, if only you'd actually know who Kaneki is and what he has been dealing with haha I actually really felt awkward for some moments but enjoyed the story very much, thank you :D
pancakes21 chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Haha, I started reading your fanfic because it sounded quirky enough, and I'm glad I did - this was absolutely hilarious! You stuck to everyone's character well too, which made it even more funny. Great job!
codename00guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
...lol.
BlackShadow1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
adroable. just brilliant
Anon chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
So funny and weird at the same time. Lol - flirting shamelessly...
MaryMarsZ chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
I didn't knew I needed this until now... It was awesome! Poor angel, he never knew the truth XD
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