I’m sorry but percy is very out of character. Maybe 4 year old percy was like this but definitely not 17 year old percy. I’ll read a little more but to be honest I might quit and go read something else.

could he do magic

Haha you should make a second book

Erm, I gotta write a review before I finish this fanfic, because, yeah, the plot you have is actually a really smart idea! BUT, Percy is actually a bit OOC. I assume that Percy already went through the war with Gaea, so he probably is a little more mature because of his time in Tartarus and his experience in war. He wouldn’t’ve chucked his sword at the lion thingy, spider whatsit because he fought in two wars already, plus Tartarus. So, yeah, that’s about it! Great fanfic!

I just love this fic, omg, I'm dying, the ending kill me
you're the best so far

“Oh my god! Your Harry? Like, Harry Potter? Like the Harry Potter!?" but it never came. And Harry couldn't be more glad.” I ️ Those parts.

I was looking for stories, as I do, and I found this one.
And it seemed good, so logically I read it.
And I was like wait- I recognize this, Ive read it before! But I kept reading because I remembered it was good.
But I forgot what happened in the end.
AND NOW I REMEMBERED AND IM /SAD/ GOSH DAM IT

This was good,
But the ending was kinda abrupt and wHY- MY /FEELINGS/.
IT'S JUST SAD, ACK.

Ok how did Hermione know to look up Poseidon. I mean I know she knows that he has water powers but that's like very broad. And I get that she's smart but she can't get to that with that little bit of imformation

please make a sequel about Percy and Harry reconnecting. i loved the story.

WOW! This story is amazhang! I love love love love love it! *u*

This fanfic is amazing! Would you write a secual? Eventually? Maybe? Did I spell secual right?

I don't like the ending to be honest. Good writing tho

Fck you Hecate

Does this have to be over? *cue pouting* can you make, like, a sequel or something? Like a part II(2)? I SOOOOOOOO wanna hear more!