Reviews for Retired
Blandy8521 chapter 1 . 8/11/2019
So I guess your title is similar to in Halo how Spartans aren't officially considered KIA
Ghost of Los Angeles chapter 1 . 7/25/2019
The ending is what made me tear up
Because only Ren and Nora showed up that means the rest Team JNPR RWBY (Obviously) SSSN and Penny are all KIA
odth03 chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
in over 700 fanfics this is the first in a long time to almostnmake me cry
DemonFoxBK201 chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Damn you, you made me cry a school Q-Q
Very well written, not usually a ladybug shipper but yep, got me there
Nice work
Typo Negative chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
There's a heartbreaking Code Geass story called "I saw my lady weep" about a posthumous message left behind by a fem!Lelouch. I read it every once in a while and it never fails to make me cry. Until now it was the only one that could do that. You've just added another one. I hope you're proud of yourself.
herald of the scourge chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
gah, I think I have dust in my eyes, my eyes won't stop watering...'burst into tears'.
you know, I'm eventually going to learn my lesson and stop reading docs in which Ruby dies
Crescent Sunrise chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
You! *points accusingly at author* you made me cry. Do you have any idea what that means!?
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Good job.

Holy hell that was good. I wasn't sure what to think at first. I didn't think it would go down like that. And I'm getting teary eyed just thinking about it. You surprise me once again. And I've begun reading the sequel, also very good.
CS.
Ninjapandas0010 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I know this was from a fair time ago now but jesus those feels man how could you do that to anyone. Especially the bit where ruby died and looked at Evelyn and thought it was Blake. Again jesus the feels but dam good bit of righting you've done
Misslieness chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
I'm sitting hear with tears in my eyes now :( Well-written piece!
AndJrew76 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
This is a very well written story. I started to cry at the end when Ruby thought she was seeing Blake. Have a good day and keep writing!
charbchillin chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
Fuck me. I'm really crying. Good job. It takes a lot for me to cry but you did it. I should buy you a gift.
kaiju62 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
So solid, really not what I expected from the title but a very pleasant surprise. If it's okay then in my head I like to imagine this as the end of the Ladybug relationship as spelled out in your "Lemonade" series. I understand there are clashes like ReNora being a thing and so on, but it's been a long time for all of them and that could have come to pass. Super sad but obviously a very possible outcome for people who live the kinds of lives they live.

Thanks for your writing
On-Eno chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Well written, if sad and bleak at times. Makes those who read it actually feel as if they are a part of the story, rather than as an outside observer. I do wish that you had an epilogue of sorts where Ruby met with her family, her team, and most importantly, Blake, again, but other than that, I have no complaints about the story. Well done.
RealTerminal chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
This was heartbreaking, and beautiful, after you reccomended Pink Lemonade I didn't expect to find this, you're a fantastic writer.
the red mark chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
amazing thanks for a feels trip now i have to get some tissues
:( great story
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