This story is so cute! I love how wholesome and sweet this is, the characterization is great, and I really enjoy how each chapter is a little vignette into their lives together while still progressing the ~romance~ ;D Really nice job, I'm enjoying!

Love every single chapter

I love this whole concept and it is wonderfully written.

aaaAAa this is so cute. also lol are they playing smash?

I was so excited to get the email and see that you'd updated! as always, your writing has such a pleasant cadence to it. it's really just easy and pleasant to read and you can paint such a nice picture without diving into purple prose territory and i just really dig it. also: maka's characterization is particularly wonderful in this fic but i reaaaally like the shades of her we get to see in this one. stubborn, stubborn maka.

thank you so much for giving me something new to read this morning!

I absolutely love this.

hey i really liked this chapter the part when soul realized he no longer wanted isolation kinda hit close to home i really enjoyed it keep writing please :)

Really well written :)!

aaAAAA dealing with Maka's mom always makes things heavy and rough. Soul is her constant, though, and you handled it wonderfully.

Adorable! I luv a shy Soul! He's so cute

THIS IS SO CUTE AND I CRY. ;_; babies ever after is all I've ever wanted for them.

THIS IS STILL REALLY CUTE. I love the way you write them!

The only critique I have is you used "dessert" instead of "desert"! One too many s's makes that an ice cream sundae instead c:

The kiss was so long overdue and you really made it feel that way. Aaaah, they've liked each other for so long :''')

I really enjoyed this. The connected drabbles are sweet and in character, and I like this vignette approach to their developing relationship.

Ooh! Ooh! More plz! more plz!
- DeaththeKidOCD

Naw oblivious and sassy soul and

Car scene was pretty great, the mix of silliness and passion.