Nice Twain reference.

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Damn. This was great. Love it! ;) Any chances of a continuation of this? Or the same events from Natsu's POV? Would love to see more ;)

Thank you for sharing!

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Reading this for the second time. I just saw I didn't leave a review the first time (shame on me), so here it is!
I absolutely love the way you portrayed Natsu and Gray's relationship. It's so... real. I really like the idea that they're closer than most people believe and understand each other better than anyone.

This was very sweet. I really enjoy your Gray and Lyon stories. I'm probably going to hunt them all down now... Just a heads up. ;)

Good point about Gray.
Also Yah!
Someone who gives Nastu and Gray some depth to them that wasn't smashed in their face in cannon.

*Extreme gratsu shipping squeal*

Holy crap, that was really good ;; It was very well written and they were all in character, spot on actually. In my eyes it could definitely be something that would have happened canonly. So good job! You're awesome!

I enjoyed reading this! It's always interesting to read about the thoughts of someone like Gray, especially concerning his thoughts since Galuna Island. I liked that you mentioned that, back at this point in the series, Lucy really didn't know Natsu or Gray well enough to understand what was going on with them yet. It's easy to forget that the relationship they have now started off without her understanding them very well.

Me likey! Fresh idea and great writing!
I can see this developing as a multiple chapters fic
Hope to see more from you!