Okay. You gotta make this an original story! An Epic about Angel like warriors, but at the same time a romance between a queen and her soldier that are stopping a mad king looking for the hero/chosen one! People would kill to get a copy of this kinda story!

And keep going. I know it's hard to balance our lives and our passion for creativity. Which reminds me, check out my story called Burning Love! I think you'll like it.

An AU where Elsa's an ordinary, but ice powered child prodigy.

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.

Please continue this story

Its not a big deal about the (Y/N) though I just copay and paste it in word and do find and change. great story

your story is good and it is just my opinion but i hate reader inserts so much I get so trigger when I see a (Y/N). Your story is supper good though

Nice to see u back, you should take a glance at my Frozen story if you get a chance

Great start to the story. You did a great job of conveying the emotions of it.
I'll read the rest ASAP.

Hope you update soon

Yo, I'm not reading your story brecause I don't like the perspective, but just thought I'd give you a warning on the off chance someone hasn't already threatened you.

Second person perspective generally isn't allowed on this site, and it could possibly cause your story to get taken down, so you might want to upload it on a different site as well, or at the very least make sure you back up all your chapters.

nice chapter

"Ooh, you shut up! What did I expect you to say? You're the criminal who got us all into this mess!" Now Anna was hitting below the belt in her panicked, lashing out fear.
"Ouch. I deserved that." Eugene rubs at his aching behind that Anna just verbally kicked, though Rapunzel looked even more hurt than her thick-skinned husband.
"People change, Anna! Even a guy who's done some bad things or hurt you before, when the moment of truth comes, he can turn out to be your greatest superhero, even the love of your life, if you believe in him." With a smirk over the woolly baby sheep in her arms up at Eugene, compassionate Rapunzel, referring to a blushing Hans and her own heart-throb indirectly, each one on either side of her, says to Anna with wide eyes and an experienced nuzzle to her once again hirsute stubbly love's stunningly good-looking chin.
"Thanks, Liebling… I think." With Pascal in a quizzical orange shade on his shoulder, Eugene responds to his little woman. He pulls her lissome body, pesky lamb in her arms and all, onto his lap with that silly crooked grin returning to his once upon a time thieving handsome features as he pets her short shock of brown waves to his chest caressingly.
Anna 'hmphs' and crosses her arms, sitting back in the opposite seat bench, skeptically unimpressed.
"Anna! Manners!" Giving apologetic glances all around, Idun pinches her rude daughter's arm before Agdar comes back to return his attention to the carriage interior and the young redhead who was still resolute in his gung-ho offer, despite Anna giving him a silent look of daggers.

I don't like Anna at all.

Ugh, that Anna's bossy!

Chill out, Anna, Elsa's alive!