Sad that this never made it to the rest of the straw hats but I stilled enjoyed the story never the less. Thank you for all your hard work in taking the time to write and upload this story. I hope you update again someday.

I really like how you captured their loyalty and love for Luffy and how their enemies don't even see or understand this.

Yes, you get it! Sooo many people think it’s one or the other, or based off of eros. Thank you.

Epic! Did anyone ever try and get Sanji to betray Luffy?

Nice work with Nami's seduction skillset

Yes, the SHP are really laid back... unless you cross a certain line

Usopp can be quite scary too ;)

...that's a lot of money ;)

Again with the blasé attitude with the blood on the toy;)
Now I can't quite picture the toy in question, I just know that it's ugly ;)

Haha, and they're all so blasé about it ;) The Straw Hats are so badass!

In love with this fic already! Usopp and Nami's reactions are my fave so far, but you write them all so well!

This story is fantastic. Seeing the crew respond to the idea of disloyalty is oh so sweet.

This was great! Would love to see more from the other members!

I am in love with this! The stories of everyone is fantastic! Please write more!

I like the way you use the term "peacock" in a literary metaphor for this scrub captain. I also love how you describe the Strawhat's loyalty to Luffy. Ha ha, and their reactions at the end of this chapter (2) are great!

If I have a criticism, it's that you try to get across deep humanistic attributes with minimalist vocabulary. Like, I know you have your own writing style, and that's great. I just personally would use different, more elabourate words. Maybe that's confusing, though. I'm sorry if I'm not making any sense.

I like your writing, I swear I'm trying to compliment you.