I liked that. Touching and well written.

So she killed herself? And how did he die?

beautiful fic

OMG! I'm crying again. Please don't change it. Not many stories can make me cry, but, look, i'm doing it again. My only suggestion is leave it as it is. It was great. Keep writing and you'll get past your writers block. Try writing something new and maybe you'll get an idea. That usually works for me. ::wipes away tear:: Good job...

I FOUND you, stinky! Why on EARTH wouldn't you let us read? It's SO GOOD. Of course, in your happy, fluffy style. But fluff is good! Hmmm. The sheep is wagging his butt at me. You write WELL. Have no fears; be Britt and show the world your writing!

This is so wonderful and so sad. So poignant. Chills raced down my spine when reading. I can only imagine what it will be like to actually see this on the silver screen. I anticipate I will cry buckets!

Bittersweet, my kind of ending. Well done!

Uhmm Mortal don't stay in Mandos, just passed by until their 'mysterious' final destiny. I don't know it was very clear in the fic, but is a mino thing. I added this to my favorites! ñ_ñ

I think Arwen is very IC, she was somehow bitter for her choice (at least in the beginning) for the Men's gift, unlike Lúthien. *Claps*

*drools* that was so good. i love stories that have a happy ending like that.

how could you not be happy with this story? I love it! the way you discribed everything was AMAZING!and the whole story was really well written, it felt like it was right out of the book!i kno the story is but tolkien didn't go into detail, and you did an amazing job with details!

I liked it. It was sweet. I liked how she refered to him more as Estel then Aragorn. I think you got her character pretty well understood too. Keep writing.

Aww, that was really sweet. And true to the book as well. There are a good handful of stories just like this, Arwen's point of view of Aragorn's death but this is definitely one of the better ones. Don't be so hard on yourself, I think it's great. If you really want some constructive criticism all I can say is maybe a little more detail would be nice.

that was such a great story! soooo sad! keep writing!

This was really good, and original too! There just aren't enough fics out there with Arwen and Aragorn romance! It's all either Legolas or Mary-Sue! Well Done!

Very pretty. Nice wording and tone.

I thought it was pretty good. Hey, speaking of the TT, did you like those Estel puns when Arwen was talking to Aragorn and she's like, "There is still hope"?