Reading these reminds me of a movie where the camera keeps shifting from a close up of one person to the next. It's interesting to see the same scenes through each person's eyes. Mikey and Miwa are so cute together, they really care for each other.

Mikey had so much turmoil to work through. And it was so sweet when he tried to check up on Leo because Donnie was still hiding in his own room. I also enjoyed the Mikey and Miwa snuggle moments, they will always have a close knit bond. The Splinter moments keep leaving me teary eyed!

I hope Santa was good to you!

Poor Donnie, he was carrying such a heavy burden. But thankfully he has his family to help him. Splinter at the end was a touching moment and hopefully gave Donnie some well deserved peace.

good chapter
its sad/happy to see Splinter again. knowing that he loves them.

great next chapter
good to see POV with Raph
can't wait to read more.
who's next? Miwa?
have a great Christmas
Merry Christmas

Aww Raph, always the most emotional turtle. Although Raph better be careful, Mikey's temper is just as bad as Raph's own, if not worse and Mikey can kick Raph's shell. But hopefully this also means that Raph can reach Mikey when he gets into his own funk. And yes, Donnie next sounds good. Merry Christmas.

Awww! Makin' me feel warm inside... *smiles sadly*

i can finally review. yesterday had no power
great POV of Leonardo
can't wait to read more

Raph! Do Raph's POV next! I liked it!

Raph carrying Leo back to bed had me laughing out loud. That is so how Raph would handle a stubborn Leo. This was a lovely companion piece offering insights into the events from Part 2. You definitely should also include April and Casey's viewpoints. I'm thinking maybe Raph for the next chapter? Go from eldest to youngest turtle, then on to eldest to youngest human?

Hmmmmm...I think Raph should go next!

After this, are you going to make another lion king story.

Oh, this mad me sad. Poor Donnie, and poor everyone! Splinter's gone and they're all so miserable! And Donnie is such a nice guy, I feel awful for him! I can't write this anymore! *bawls*