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AL wright, you lost me. Where is the transition from a Grimm born in a lab to this? It felt a little jarring, only made worse by the long time since an update.

I need to re-read the previous chapter in order to remember what's currently happening. It's been quite a while, hasn't it? I felt a bit weirded out that Monty didn't make an appearance at all during the entirety of this chapter though, but I love the fight! Those poor souls didn't know what hit them! Haha! Oh yeah, there were errors, so I advise that you re-read this chapter to take 'em all out.

Anyway, keep it up!

I would pair MontyxRuby because one Ruby is ADORABLE, two a silver eyed warrior and a human/grimm hybrid would be really cool and three because of the amount of time they both spend together and how protective he is of Ruby.

Monty's past interest me, and I'd really love to see more of that. Also, that part with him dancing like a true professional was my favorite.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

As always, I enjoyed all the little things you put in the story. Like Monty Oum being on the top of the score board and how the shopkeeper seems to be the god of commerce. All of these things don't make me feel like RWBY has flaws but instead just makes me pay more attention to the characters. Both in the show and in this one.

Greatly enjoyed the flashback to when he was put in a cage match with a Bewolf. Neither party wanted to fight but neither wanted to die. I found that interesting because in every situation, its the Grimm that want to pick a fight with humans. Regardless of circumstances. The fight influenced him so much that he even saw them fighting in an arena to be evil. Fighting just for entertainment. It disagreed with him and I am glad he has a stance in something. He has his own experiences and doesn't just soak up everything that RWBY tells him.

No need to give me a shout out. I simply enjoy your stories and telling you what I enjoyed.

heh well i like this story and you could say im quite picky when it comes to liking stories but i like this keep up the good workB A START!

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While she might be jealous, the Reaper dud not want to get in the way of her sister's happiness. -I found an error.

This was short, but I guess it's alright. The training went by pretty smooth, and I feel sorry for poor innocent Ruby. She's too young to experience such things! And I sure do hope that being in the last scene would kill the three, if not for my sake.

Anyway, keep it up!

Enjoy the training with Yang. It would be interesting on what he actually learns and how fast his reaction time is.

What I dislike is the shortness of the chapter. I didn't feel immersed. Only passively interested.

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Like the chapter.

The flashback was good. About how we learned what his life was like and introducing a character without it feeling forced. He felt so much hate and boredom being locked inside a room with nothing to do. No wonder everything he does interests him.

Thanks for still having him learn basic human customs and traditions. That kiss really came out of nowhere. But in a surprise way instead of a bad idea.

ONE PUUUUUUUUUUUNCH!

Y'know, I'm planning on writing a OPM X RWBY story, with Lord Boros as the main character. The ending to this chapter made me laugh!

Yang had showed him this place and told him that it was where the students came to train after classes. -The only mistake I found.

I honestly don't know how to feel about the pairing, but knowing me, I don't understand a lot of things. Oh well. And that scene with the rose petals reminded me of Phase 34. Ah, good times...

Anyway, keep up the good work!

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I look forward to how Monty and Zewi get along. Their both animals in form so will they compare each others smell for familiarity or danger? He is a Grimm after all.

Thanks for keep up the broken English for Monty,but attempt to keep to RWBY lore. They were good comparisons but they don't have WW2 or Google. They have the White fang and scrolls.

Ruby Rose did not know how to feel when she saw what she did through the infirmary door.

And it was all that fool's fault!

He strode toward the terminal in the wall.

-Errors I found and corrected. You should read it again just to be safe.

Well, that was an interesting chapter. And boy, Ruby being jealous was too adorable for me to handle! Young love huh? I'm guessing there's gonna be a love triangle now, eh?

Ozpin is being observant as ever, and from what I can guess, Raven is probably working for him. And that hybrid thing was a cargo that escaped and killed the White Fang soldiers? Well, I like where this story is going. If there are more hybrids out there, then trouble is just beyond the horizon.

Anyway, keep it up!