This is very funny a little spermatic at times and the plot devices aren’t the best but I feel like you do well with character Arc’s (pun intended) and character development. I also think your style of writhing is very funny and almost always made me laugh. Anyway I if this isn’t dead I hope you continue because I really like how you Handel the relationships between characters.

okay this one made me smile bunnicula was my favorite story growing up heh

Well, you lost me here. I hate when authors use such shitty plot crutches as prophecies. And this particular one "fortune teller" is really bad. Sadly, but is spoiled most of my interest. I've looked in next couple of chapters and that battle Ruby vs Blood Rose is killed rest of it. Bye.

lol FlashFreeze/phantie is hilarious In this chapter ..hmm will the other girls get their own Psycho-phantom? I know the fall into madness is required but given the actual series its not that big a push to see Blake or Yang snap ...Yang especially...

A Bloody Rose in king Cale's court? Nice.

hahahaha poor Torchy he really needs a hand .. and a leg up for that matter * ooh! ooh! I got more! he should really quite while he still has a head! does this mean Ruby disarmed him? if he gets arrested can he even STAND trail? , I'd say they caught him red handed but... XD

oh by L-sama's glorious golden erm...everything... A version of Ruby with a personality nearly identical to Wade Wilson!? Welp the bad guys are fucked ...XD

Neptune?
That's unexpected

Ruby's like a fing mofia boss when it comes to sweats

The only time someone was shorter than Neo.

Why?

Will Qrow find Oscar like in Volume 5 and team RNJR talk to Ozpin too.

Hmmm. You've caught my interest. This was quite the original plot and it's really making me cackle quite a lot. Hope you update this. Good luck with your other stories.

When's the next update?

I hope you're still continuing the story cause I have some idea on some the story like when Jaune was practicing he talks to Pyrrha for real on the scroll.