I liked the whole story. Though I'm leaving a comment here since this chapter is the one which sticks with me most.

I really doubt it will ever happen in canon, but a marriage between Shireen and Jon (if RLJ) really would solve so many issues on royal inheritance. Great idea.

Eek!i loved it! Really great writing and such an intriguing plot. Can't wait to see where it goes!

This is brilliant. I really like cunning Rhaella and how she adjusts to her new position. Great work!

What kind of bullshit is this? Jon’s dragons?! No they were Dany’s you dumb fuck. Stfu you stupid idiot. You’re trash. You’re an embarrassment. Stupid fuck.

Jon is the true King and is older then Raella's son by Tywin ! ,! Jon can rule in his own Right as the true King ! Jon needs No Regent !

Ew, you gave Rhaella to Tywin.

I have to say that I love Lordaeron and his interactions with Daenerys and the rest of his siblings. I imagine him looking like Conor McClain or Tom Heukels. Rhaella's resilience and subtle resistance, encouraging Daenerys to be a dragon and restore their family's right. Oh, this is such an interesting plot and these relationships that would seem unreal in canon come off naturally.

You have a few dates wrong. In 262, Rhaegar was around 3 years old and he was born the same day his grandfather and great-grandfather died in the fire if Summerhall. Rhaella became queen and a mother at the same time.

Cersei didn't become queen until 284 for that was when she married Robert.

Damn Rhaella played the long game here! And yet, I feel like Tywin knew what she was doing from the start.

Hi before I continue reading this chapter I was hoping you could tell me if Jon and Shireen really will marry. It's really not my thing and I don't want to continue if that's the case. You're a great writer but I can't read the rest if it happens.

not my favorite story but it was a good time filler

The king is dead, long live the king.

(whimpers)
His own mother...

(pouting slightly)
Does this mean no Khal Drogo?

Go Jon.