Just Reached chapter 37 i hope you decide to come back to this story eventually its very interesting :)

new Reader here just read chapter 7 and i would like to say i really enjoy the story so far don't let some haters or grouchy people stop you from writing what you like :D anyway i will be back to reading now i see 30 more chapters to read and i am excited to see what i will end up fully reading in the coming days.

Oh god please tell me a certain on sale lord isn’t gonna do what I think he is

It’s a fanfic in a fictitious world with fake people, it doesn’t have to be realistic it’s meant to be fun people just over think shit, think naruto or DBZ they move faster than the speed of sound because of a type of energy they use which is also fake it’s for fun

Damn this is good, tied in why he would become a familiar and it’s well written and the story seems to progress at a good rate couldn’t ask for much more besides some killing but it’s still a bit early for big badass fights

I'm guessing the hat is either Colbert's or someone else I haven't fact checked yet.

Ysmir really likes lakes. I hope that becomes canon.

he dosent recognise Serena? wtf is the mc gone senile

fucking stupid that Louise could use the Shouts

little dissapointed that you are skipping Siesta. and some other minor events

hope you wont kill the thief. Make her an ally

fus would have been enaugh

Hope he teaches Sylphid the Thumn

Bravo with the Porco Rosso reference it was a great movie

Well, that was a fun read. Kinda went off the rails, but your writing is pretty solid for a non-native speaker.