I like to see experimentation on the site and it was fun to see you try out something new with your own OC and adventurous take on a series. I don't know RWBY but the start of an adventure is the start of something fresh so thanks for sharing!

Thanks also for taking time to read my story. I agree, reading and reviewing is an integral part of keeping enthusiasm alive so here's hoping your enthusiasm keeps up. Thanks for sharing!

I like the POV style especially for the introductions, which I think you did very well. Can't wait for more.

Your writing style seems pretty decent, just make sure to make it a new paragraph when a different person is talking, it helps readers make sure that they know who should be talking.

And as for the POV, I personally like 3rd person, but I'll leave that part up to you, just write it the way you feel comfortable. Other than that, good job so far.

I'm loving that everyone's getting a nice little introduction and we get to see how some characters interact. The POV style works for me too; especially in these early parts where we're still learning about these brand new characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Seems good so far. What I would suggest is just make one P.O.V for each chapter. But since these are only the intros, just get out excerpts of each character introduction like this chapter.

TBH, as you know, I prefer POV writing. Seems easier to me.
Got Sierra in beautifully, plus a couple more characters, glad to see Shade's future, about time to see the other two.

Not sure about the POV but I think you made this work.
Good job, and really looking forward to the next chapters.

3rd person omniscient when describing fights, limited 3rd person for four or more present, stick to one pov when two-three are present

Question before I submit my own OC. I already have him featured in two other stories, is he still eligible?

would it be ok if I submit a whole team?