Amazing and hilarious keep up the good work

HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAAAA LOLOL

Nice work. I love this. :) Like I said, I have an OC with Itachi in an fic I came up with, but I know better than to post it here. :P

Let reviews ring for your rhyming!

Um, I have no words, except that it was pretty funny, but I also spotted a lot of actual canon characters (outside and inside the Naruto series) having the exact similar characteristics as combined into one person. Such as Hinata being so shy "zero personality" or Sasuke being so "emotional" and overpowered.

I never really understood what made an OC a "Mary-Sue or Gary-Stu" except for the VERY obvious reasons. I honestly think the term Mary-Sue is often misused a lot, but I'm not saying this to make you feel bad because I thought this was pretty funny. I'm just throwing down my two cents because this reminded of it again. I mean, Kishimoto himself could've done any of this in the manga himself if he wanted to (so would people still call the character a Mary-Sue then?) and people are just criticizing certain ideas like these because it's mostly not done by the author himself and many other's had tried it themselves, but what got on people's nerves is that it was done SO poorly/badly (most of the time.)

Anyway, I just thought I'd review my true opinion that's based on this stuff. Good job, by the way.

P.S. You're an awesome rhymer!

This was so incredibly entertaining. Thanks writer.

This speaks to me! I can probably name an OC that matches half the poem, how sad. Good job on the poem :) (it's very relatable)

Really loved this, Mary sues and Gary stu's urk the heck out of me and ruin what could of possibly been a great story x
-Madam Guillotine the Seraph

One of the best things I have ever seen on this website. It's also kind of funny how this can be applied to most fandoms.

Hilarious, and relates to about half the fanfictions out there （ν）

:XD I was laughing so much
Love it

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This just might. Sues in Naruto's annoying. :( I do admit I have a fantasy story about my OC and Itachi but that I keep to myself! *Shifty eyes because the story is N*** and so fangirlish...* Sometimes you have to put it on paper. But I keep it there...

I love it! This reminds me of Madame Mayhem's Sue Alphabet, but it's still very different :D lol this was funny. Hits the Sue nail on the head.

I'm glad to see that you've finally finished it! Your rhyming was very well done and it was funny to boot. I don't know which ones I liked more, but X, Y, and Z are definitely some favorites. You pointed out some Sues I didn't exactly cover myself, and you managed to do such with a good amount of lighthearted humor. I really like this, thank you so much for showing this to me. Lol really did give me a laugh!

This was a great read, the rhyming is a great touch, and it all made me laugh :)