You suck. Actually read this back and it sounds bad

There's a 13 year old girl, and she wished
that her dad would come home from
the army, because he'd been having
problems with his heart and right
leg. It was 2:53 p.m . When she made
her wish. At 3:07 p.m. (14 minutes
later), the doorbell rang, and
there her Dad was, luggage and all!
I'm Katie and I'm 20 and I've been
having trouble in my job and on the
verge of quitting. I made a simple
wish that my boss would get a new
job. That was at 1:35 and at 1:55
there was an announcement that he
was promoted and was leaving for
another city. Believe me...this
really works!
My name is Ann and I am 45 years
of age. I had always been single
and had been hoping to get into a
nice, loving relationship for many
years. While kind of daydreaming
(and right after receiving this email)
I wished that a quality person would
finally come into my life. That was at
9:10 AM on a Tuesday. At 9:55 AM
a FedEx delivery man came into my
was cute, polite and
could not stop smiling at me. He
started coming back almost everyday
(even without packages) and asked me
out a week later. We married 6
months later and now have been
happily married for 2 years.
What a great email it was!
Just scroll down to the end, but
while you do, think of a wish.
Make your wish when you have completed
scrolling. Whatever age you are, is the
number of minutes it will take for your
wish to come true. are 25 years
old, it will take 25 minutes for your wish
to come true).
Go for it!
SCROLL DOWN!
STOP!
Congratulations! Your wish will
now come true in your age minutes.
Now follow this carefully...it
can be very rewarding!
If you repost this within the next 5 min.
something major that you've been wanting
will happen. :)

Actually, if they were juniors, then Percy would definitely be 17. That's because at the beginning of The Battle of the Labirinth Paul secures a place at Goodw High for Percy to start ninth grade, which means that by the start of his freshman year he would be 15, as his birthday is on August 18. This means that by the start of Percy's junior year, he would have already celebrated his 17th birthday.

the author has a thing for red heads

The basic story really liked me.
But after the 8th chapter some things went wrong. Because Scott did not have Percy's Alpha? Derek had blue eyes. Or did something that made Alpha?
This whole "manifested" thing liked it, but it was not well done.

... Wait so what is Percy i still don't get it i even readed the DAM (see what i did there) story trice

Well there's a couple of errors. And the end is not the best. But we should do a sequel.

why do they say 'oh my GODS?' isn't this a 'no gods' story?

awesome story, a bit confusing there at the but still awesome none the less! though i don't usually like stories that take away Percy's powers, i was incredulous of the way it was written. the sentences were very well formed compared to most fan fictions! By the way, though, what's with the italics? it made it a bit confusing to read. thanks for writing!

WHAT! AFTER THREE YEARS AND HE STILL CAN'T CONTROL HIMSELF?

UH WHAT ARE YOU STUPID OR SOMETHING? STILES LIKED HER SINCE THIRD FREAKING GRADE!

WHAT the hell? STILES LIKES HER, why da hell would he ship them?

HOW THE HELL WOULD A HUMAN HOLD A FREAKING WEREWOLF DOWN.

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Yeah okay this Stiles here... Scotts drunk... I know its hard to believe. I'm good with computers (kinda) but I dont think i understand what Scott is trying to say... sorry

Yes write a sequel!