awww that was so cute!

Adorable! You've just one of the most adorable fanfics in the history of adorable fanfics!

This differs from you writing actual AU's. it's fun to see, so great job! I really love your writing! I'm scared of one thing, though. The angst from Deal With The Devil totally drained me. I'm not sure if I can take any more. At least today. When it comes to angst, you should win a nobel prize. I wonder if it'll be as intense, but I'll probably check it out tomorrow.

Aw Natsu

this is a REALLY nice storyy!

that was absolutely adorable

. that was so kawaii it gave me so many feels!

Hi
Okay, I liked this one-shot very much, but it all felt a bit rushed to me. She shoots him and immediately goes all "omg I'll do everything you want" - and I really don't get why they're spending all their time in the woods and all those background things... but then again, it's an OS, so the info doesn't need to be included. Still, kinda confused me.
(And I just realized that this sounds so critical... sorry, the OS is still great)

I laughed so hard when he fell from the tree.

aaaaaaaawwwwwww... they are so cute you should continue this story

I love this

I thought this was very good for your first shot at fantasy. I could completely see this turning into a multi-chapter fic. I think it would be totally awesome, especially with your plot development skills.
Keep writing!

-Nikko

"I get messy when I eat berries" OMG xD. This was so fun and cute! I just love when crazy AUs get turned into such well-written and enetertaining fics! Good job! I loved it! :')

Such a great idea *_* I really wish it had a sequel...

Cute