Reviews for Words in the Night
geekqueen2010 chapter 4 . 4/13
Oh my glob, that was fricken glorious and I wish I was in their universe so i could eat the cheesy bread too! But, why did the person get akumatized into Dupain-Cheng cheesy bread in the first place?! Or did the person's cheesy bread lose to something her parents made in a baking competition? Also, despite the show doing so, you don't need to have an akuma-of-the-day every single chapter, I gave lots of ideas for stuff in my review of Chapter 2. Perhaps some can be Adrienette as well, also Mari and Adri study dates for their homework and such, group hangouts like ice skating or visiting an arcade too.
geekqueen2010 chapter 3 . 4/13
I can't those dummies fought an akuma as civilians just cuz they didn't want the other person getting hurt! And wow they oblivious to not realize each other's identity after successfully beating the akuma. I'm also shook that Hawkdad didn't order the akuma victim to leave Adrien alone and head elsewhere to find the duo he's really after, or was Hawkbench in too much shock that his son was not only crazy enough to fight an akumatized person but that he also did so successfully? Or was Hawkbucket the only one to figure their identities and is plotting how to take the Miraculous without them knowing until it's too late?
geekqueen2010 chapter 2 . 4/13
I'm already sad that there's only two more chapters. This is soooooo good!

Ideas, um they could do movie nights where they cuddle under a blanket cuz that's what friends do, and gaming nights since marinette always can pwn Adrien at playing Ultimate Mecha Strike III, and nights where they just talk while stuffing their faces with the leftover, maybe some karaoke nights where she teaches him how to sing better since his English voice in the Christmas special wasn't that bad, dance nights cuz he likes to dance and she's not confident in her ability cuz of her clutziness she wants to overcome, fencing and martial arts lessons cuz his purrincess almost got mugged one night(though Chat doesn't know she could've beat them cuz she's LB), some family dinners cuz fighting lessons aren't quiet enough and they want to know the boy that keeps visiting her(cue lots of teasing from Tom and Sabine, and inclusion in any holidays for kitty), strategy sessions to get him as an Emancipated Minor once he realizes his dad is rubbish, a few exclusive interviews so Alya won't blab about their friendship to anyone, plotting sessions to give Lila her comeuppance since no one messes with his princess(and he started feeling bad about the lame advice he gave her as a civilian).

I uh, hope those ideas help lead to more chapters if you decide to ever continue this.
geekqueen2010 chapter 1 . 4/13
Despite this being a discontinued story, I really want to read it cuz I love the MariChat ship. It's just the realist ship to me, since they fall for their imperfect sides, thus guaranteeing that the reveal will go smoother than one finding out before the other.
PurifiedWildAkuma chapter 4 . 8/27/2017
This is really cool! Except for the civilians eating the akumatized victim... that seemed wrong, but it was still an AWSOME fanfiction.
spinnerofdark chapter 4 . 4/5/2017
Eat their way out ... lol, poor Plagg had the solution from the start.
Dwarrior chapter 4 . 3/8/2016
This was AWESOME. I cannot wait to see what else you come up with next time you get an idea for this story. It was funny, sweet, cute and just really great...
xXxAngelStormxXx chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
This whole story is just great,
AshWoods210 chapter 4 . 12/11/2015
can't wait for the next chapter
SilverDragon-Purity chapter 4 . 12/10/2015
Omg, that was so cheesy! ;) Loved it!
Niom Lamboise chapter 4 . 12/10/2015
That was excellent! Please update soon!
p3pp3rmintt chapter 4 . 12/10/2015
Another great chapter!
blackoctubre chapter 4 . 12/10/2015
muy bueno sigue asi
Jessica Jayme Bell chapter 3 . 12/6/2015
Don't a-paw-logise XD
Cat puns are the best
caitybug13 chapter 3 . 12/3/2015
I love this story so much!

I saw the same post on tumblr as well, and I think yoy came up with a great chapter with that as your inspiration :) Can't wait until your next update!
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