FUCK YOU NATSU

You dense headed flame-brain... the way he's acting makes me hate him...

Are you going to write a sequel to this story or what...? I hope you do.

I wish it just ended here instead of an open-ended sequel, I guess it could still be counted as an ending. If a second book comes out I'd still pick it up. It was interesting, and the demonization was unexpected. Natsu suddenly wanting to get close to Lucy was too abrupt and didn't flow well there. Very unfortunate that it seems the goddess keys won't be in the story anymore, they didn't show up that much. I loved Hunter though, hopefully he'll still be in the story if it continues. There weren't much details about Lucy training or using her dragon slayer powers either, after the initial build up about her getting the lacrima planted. And when she did use a dragon roar, it was after she got turned into a demon so... why didn't she get new demon powers? It was overall enjoyable, the beginning was the best I have to admit.

I'm sorry I don't want to be rude but I think I shoud said this, actually I like the idea with the new keys for lucy, but I think this too much, she is too much powerful, with that power I think she can be one of The Saint Ten Wizard member, she is to much powerful just in one year and i think thats not make sense.. maybe this is too late to comment about this since I almost finished read, I just think that maybe your story will get better but I guess I was wrong, I just don't understand why you bring the Nine Demon Gates to the Games, they're dark guild right? and the chance they became guild like Fairy Tail is small, even Jellal's guild had have hard times to survive, right?

It's actually astounding to me that you could go back and fix "plot holes" in your story and STILL have a story riddled with incorrect spelling and awkward sentences. How do you not know the difference between your and you're? Well, I suppose it doesn't matter anyways because even if I could excuse the incorrect spelling and awkward sentences the story and plot is pretty terrible and it was a struggle just to get halfway through chapter two. I had to quit after she made that stupid statement about a person being taught celestial magic and a born celestial mage aren't the same cus a born one can do stuff the other can't. No way, two things that are different can do different things. Honestly, what a waste of my time. I wish I could get those ten minutes of my life I wasted reading this BS back.

The black rhinos are only extinct in one area but are still endangered. I do believe in giving a voice to the animals. Let's do what we can to help them all!

this is such a good fic but the "We were just glade your safe know" is too much. ಥ_ಥ I'm willing to ignore that injustice and I'll try to enjoy this fic. thank you for having such awesome imagination and sharing it to us.

I feel sad now but I WANT TO HELP

WHY DOES THIS HAPPEN TO CUTE ANIMALS!

I really enjoyed this story, I look forward to the next part of it. My only problem with it was a lot of the spelling mistakes made it hard to follow? You're throwing so many interesting story ideas out here and I almost want to say "wow slow down a second, let us appreciate for a moment what Lucy went through finding the god keys, being captured etc. Also being laxus' little sister!" :) keep up the good work and remember we're always learning :) even professionals make mistakes ;) xx

This. Is. Amazing. Please, keep continuing with this story! It's really intriguing and I absolutely love it!

Okay so I like totally loved the whole story but really this is how you end it? I mean it was going really well and then you just decided to make them demons and make them lose their memories. Like seriously. That's what you did when you had such a fantastic story going! I just hope that they return to human with all their memories and Lucy all of her spirits.

Awwww I actually liked the god keys they were cool, and i liked her relationship with laxus. Now everybodys gone all demon with amnesia and left. Ughhh i hope things somewhat go back to normal

Oooh snap.
Just wondering: does summoning these powerful gods consume a ton of her magic or not tht much cuz she's stronger now? I mean they just pop up wen they please and it has no effect? Just wondering~ keep up the amz work