i love this story ️

I love this story so damn much. It was amazing!

Your story is amazing but I can’t finish it with how frustrated Lucy is making me with her levels of ignorance.

I LOVE YOUR STORY, i found it original and it was amazing! You have less typos then i find to be normal in a story and I applaud to that, hope to read more of your AMAZING fanfic later on! 333

If Laxus is there, then Phantom would be absolutely crushed, not even Jose would be able to stand against Laxus in 784 never mind later on. Another thing, The Magic Council didn't make Laxus a Wizard Saint because they didn't like his attitude, if he is different now by this time he would like already be a Saint.

This will be very nick-picky but the Strauss where the last out of the younger generation to join fairy tail and Mira was not in charge of doing anything at the guild beside's going on missions, and of course she was a bully the only people she was nice to where her siblings and no one else. And by this time Laxus should already be an S-class wizard or he would be later that year.
On another note, Cana must have been truly impressive at that age to be nominated for s-class at the same time as Laxus who also got his first nomination that year.

This was so plot, the story progression, character development.
The only downside I see was that the ending was a little rushed.

This was an amazing story, thank you for working so hard and publishing it for us to read!

I love how she doesn't become evil, it's an unexpected twist.

Laxus loves Lucy. And Lucy's being dense.

Aah, the suspense!

Honestly, as wrong as this is, I can't help but agree with Lucy. I honestly don't prefer other people seeing me when I'm sad or furious. Or have secrets. Which I have a lot of.

I think every couple has a rough patch. Remember; no one's perfect, so, you just made this fanfic more realistic and better, so I don't get why you think the readers'll be mad. Plus, this is so good.

See, this is where this story isn't cliche. In other fanfics, Lucy gets mad at Fairy Tail just for paying more attention to Lisanna and leaves, in this, you've made Lucy's love for Fairy Tail strong, just like Hiro Mashima did. That's why I really enjoy this so much.

That's totally true. Fairy Tail members are very stubborn.