An interesting alternate take on that portion of the show. Thanks.

Even if it's a little outta date, I still think this is the best Bojack fanfic out there. For whatever that's worth. Bless you few authors who write in this microscopic fandom.

This was really well written and hit me hard

I thought everything was so in-character! Plus your writing is fantastic! I have a question though. When BoJack said he wouldn't do anything with Penny, because she deserves better, was this him lying to Todd to make himself seem like a better person? I mean, he did make out with Penny, and probably would've had sex with her if Charlotte hadn't walked in. Or was BoJack being self-congratulating for not making a move on Penny when she showed up on his doorstep?

awesome brev

Congratulations on creating the first Bojack Horseman fanfic (or just the first one posted in it's own category now) hopefully many others will follow. Bojack is a great show

Nice writing. I really like your style and vocabulary. I am really looking forward for a Bojack/Penny re-encounter on S3 but I don't think it will happen, so this was a pretty good way to fullfill that desire for me. Of course, I noticed that the comedy level doesn't try to antagonize the show in any sense, but that's a great add to the story, a more cut-to-chase approach of things.

Keep up the good work and greetings form Mexico.

Good up the good work.