Reviews for Amaranthine |
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BlueMoon08 chapter 2 . 6/9 Please continue this story! It's really good! . |
Dman4869 chapter 2 . 2/22 Ty! Like the idea of a bamf Tsuna. The nicknames were hilarious XD. Can't wait for the next(hopefully) one. :D |
kelsey-kianna chapter 2 . 6/3/2019 Author update pleaseeeee |
syangchen chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 please update |
Espeon35 chapter 2 . 7/13/2018 Weird but in a good way. For once Tsuna is the one that outlived everyone but checkerface and as powerful as him. I just find it little creepy that Kawahira wants Tsuna attention, and the reason- why? Because all I could think of is that Tsuna is a sky and is not human anymore. |
Byakuri chapter 2 . 1/24/2018 I don't know if I should find it sad or funny because at one point it was funny (the names he gave them) but then it became sad (the grave part) but I actually really like this story. it's really a good one. looking forward to the next chapter |
t.laurence7 chapter 2 . 5/19/2017 Pleeeeeeeease update.? Your fic looks amazing and I really wanna know what happens next and I absolutely love R27 fics.! *squeal* :D Good luck with the future chapters.! :3 |
Jazebeth chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 Um this is my first time reading your story and i cant help but applaud you at the length of the story. But one thing i want to actually review is how little you used punctuation, and it made your story feel particularly rushed. There were some grammar mistakes as well, but i can ignore that. Just please use commas more often. |
cielsinclair chapter 2 . 1/17/2017 i found you from wattpad author-san! i love your fics, really! please update soonn |
more more chapter 2 . 1/1/2017 more more more more update update update |
Iris D. Peverell chapter 2 . 11/25/2016 Please continue this fic, i'm really curious about reborn's reaction |
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 11/4/2016 Sentence structure is something you should pay attention too. Though this chapter is way better than the last grammar-wise in my opinion :) You have an interesting idea there and I am looking forward to see what you decide to do with it. Hope you are not offended. Thank you for sharing this with us! :) |
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 You rambled a bit in this chapter. Lost yourselve in your thoughts partly. It would help to improve your story if you made sure to stay on track. Also, try to keep your sentences to halfway reasonable sizes. (I am struggling with that too, but I know that it makes a difference.) Thank you for sharing this with us! I hope you are not offended :) |
TaitZu-chan chapter 2 . 9/4/2016 Love the new chapter, can't wait for the next one! |
Hello chapter 2 . 8/25/2016 Bad? Are you Frking kidding me?! It's awesome. Now you just need to update the next chapter because I am going mad not seeing the next chapter. But seriously, I find the plot interesting, I truly hope you update soon. |